This is a good start to your blog! I won’t comment too much on the layout too much as your peers have mentioned some good suggestions themselves.
Stating that intramuscular injections can be done without a healthcare professional as an advantage sounds like a personal opinion (unless a peer reviewed source is provided?) If you look at, for example vaccine administration, the IM injections needs to occur at a specific spot on the muscle, that medical professionals are trained to easily identify. So possibly find a different advantage to mention.
As with subcutaneous injections, again, stating they are rarely painful as there are “little nerves” sounds again more like a personal opinion. Different subcutaneous regions in your body have different nerve terminals (i.e the face vs the back of your calf muscle), so again, maybe provide a different advantage.
Other than that it is great to see you submitted a draft blog so you can get better marks! Well done
Hey Anastasia, the content is really good but there are many other areas need to be improved. eg. the design of the page the pictures are not clear and labelled. And I think it could be much better of you provided some graphs.
Hello Anastasia, the blog is easy to read but there could be some visual elements added to spice things up. Also, maybe expand a bit more on some areas such as the symptoms associated with repeated intramuscular injections at the same site, and make the text more personal as to engage the reader (i.e. relate the topic or drug to the reader). Other than that, good job!
Hi Anastasia! I thought the structure of your blog content was really good and relatively easy to understand. I think the post could be improved by adding some more engaging visual elements. I think with your examples, I would want to know more about why intramuscular injection is used for these medications – you touched on it a little bit when talking about Epinephrine but I was confused by the benzylpenicillin section. Overall it was an interesting read and your content is great 🙂
Hi Anastasia,
This is a good start to your blog! I won’t comment too much on the layout too much as your peers have mentioned some good suggestions themselves.
Stating that intramuscular injections can be done without a healthcare professional as an advantage sounds like a personal opinion (unless a peer reviewed source is provided?) If you look at, for example vaccine administration, the IM injections needs to occur at a specific spot on the muscle, that medical professionals are trained to easily identify. So possibly find a different advantage to mention.
As with subcutaneous injections, again, stating they are rarely painful as there are “little nerves” sounds again more like a personal opinion. Different subcutaneous regions in your body have different nerve terminals (i.e the face vs the back of your calf muscle), so again, maybe provide a different advantage.
Other than that it is great to see you submitted a draft blog so you can get better marks! Well done
Hey Anastasia, the content is really good but there are many other areas need to be improved. eg. the design of the page the pictures are not clear and labelled. And I think it could be much better of you provided some graphs.
Hello Anastasia, the blog is easy to read but there could be some visual elements added to spice things up. Also, maybe expand a bit more on some areas such as the symptoms associated with repeated intramuscular injections at the same site, and make the text more personal as to engage the reader (i.e. relate the topic or drug to the reader). Other than that, good job!
Hi Anastasia! I thought the structure of your blog content was really good and relatively easy to understand. I think the post could be improved by adding some more engaging visual elements. I think with your examples, I would want to know more about why intramuscular injection is used for these medications – you touched on it a little bit when talking about Epinephrine but I was confused by the benzylpenicillin section. Overall it was an interesting read and your content is great 🙂