Clean and organised layout. The illustrations make the blog more fun and interesting to read.
“… enzyme alcohol dehydrogenase. ADH then swoops..” Write (ADH) after alcohol dehydrogenase. Be consistent–thiamine should not be capitalised.
Symptoms of WKS includes involuntary muscle movement, nerve damage, lethargy and trouble when walking. Please research more–involuntary muscle movement–which muscles? nerve damage–quite broad.
Do not forget to use reference appropriately.
Love your colour scheme and image, it makes the article really eye-catching. It doesn’t seem to have any references, so put these in to validate what you are saying. I would also say it just needs some general editing for grammar e.g. “As to digest”. A conclusion that links back to your introduction would also help to finalise the blog, maybe you could refer back to society’s drinking culture like you did in the intro. Overall, great job!
Clean and organised layout. The illustrations make the blog more fun and interesting to read.
“… enzyme alcohol dehydrogenase. ADH then swoops..” Write (ADH) after alcohol dehydrogenase. Be consistent–thiamine should not be capitalised.
Symptoms of WKS includes involuntary muscle movement, nerve damage, lethargy and trouble when walking. Please research more–involuntary muscle movement–which muscles? nerve damage–quite broad.
Do not forget to use reference appropriately.
Love your colour scheme and image, it makes the article really eye-catching. It doesn’t seem to have any references, so put these in to validate what you are saying. I would also say it just needs some general editing for grammar e.g. “As to digest”. A conclusion that links back to your introduction would also help to finalise the blog, maybe you could refer back to society’s drinking culture like you did in the intro. Overall, great job!